Friday, 19 February 2016

Simon Writing a narrative

Long time ago when cameras were made there was this Giant called Joe. He had a brother called Taylor. Taylor was really lazy he would do nothing but watch TV.  Joe is learning karate he is a brown belt and he is just about to earn his black belt. Joe and his brother Taylor Live under Mount Wellington In a cave. Joe’s greatest fear will be dogs he won't get over that time when he got chased by a dog!  

One day Taylor was eating potato chips and Joe was jumping on his trampoline.  Joe was waiting for his karate master. Joe said” Finally he's here”. He opened the door  and said “hello” and the  karate master said back” hello”.  He walked around their  cave  complimenting it. He said “let's get started”. He was practising  his kick move. When he did his best kick he kicked the roof of his cave. They ran outside screaming all the people away when Joe found a big mountain. He named it mount Wellington.

They moved out to another cave. they found a flat surface they dug a huge hole under ground and that was there  new  home. They went under mount Wellington and moved a there stuff. It took a long time to get to there new cave but it was worth it.

and they lived safely in their new cave.


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